a shimmerof painmirage, you arein your hot, hot heatlike quake, quiver, ripplerise upan appleand choke, chafe, writheas Ibreathe deepand hold on
B,Kudos for this poem. It really gets to the heart of how I sometimes feel when facing a new day. Sad, but very true.
bravo! i loved the staccato feel of this poem. kinda made my tongue orgasm reading it out loud.
thanks, really thanks, in a very cheesey way it means a lot that people read my drivel.I want to say "hugs" but I might have to gas myself later if I did so I'll settle with hmmm... "contact"xxB
But I LIKE cheese.
Hi I haven't been here for ages, sorry but just a quick hello!cheers,Candyhttp://gnosticminx.blogspot.com/
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B,
Kudos for this poem. It really gets to the heart of how I sometimes feel when facing a new day. Sad, but very true.
bravo! i loved the staccato feel of this poem. kinda made my tongue orgasm reading it out loud.
thanks, really thanks, in a very cheesey way it means a lot that people read my drivel.
I want to say "hugs" but I might have to gas myself later if I did so I'll settle with hmmm... "contact"
xxB
But I LIKE cheese.
Hi I haven't been here for ages, sorry but just a quick hello!
cheers,
Candy
http://gnosticminx.blogspot.com/
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