You watch me
In the strip light
Giving me your best impression of
The Glad Eye
Unknowing,
Giving me your best impression of
The Glad Eye
Unknowing,
But even then I heard
The filament rattle, rattling
in dead eyes
Later.
Pausing, Shielding
Eyes locked skywards,
Searching out a dying star
Buzzard prowl and swarm me
You grip too tight
Flecked bruises bear love
All voltage, no light
In clawed clutches I wake
The beast now
The filament rattle, rattling
in dead eyes
Later.
Pausing, Shielding
Eyes locked skywards,
Searching out a dying star
Buzzard prowl and swarm me
You grip too tight
Flecked bruises bear love
All voltage, no light
In clawed clutches I wake
The beast now
Swiftly to the fore
Where vicious hearts remain
Steady lion, you
Draping the chair
In velutinous sovereignty you sit
Stock still, stony stare'd
My faded lover Goodbye.
Leaving, it cracks,
The yolk runs red,
Seeping slowly earthbound.
Where vicious hearts remain
Steady lion, you
Draping the chair
In velutinous sovereignty you sit
Stock still, stony stare'd
My faded lover Goodbye.
Leaving, it cracks,
The yolk runs red,
Seeping slowly earthbound.
4 comments:
i like allot keep up somewhat
you have good diction and choice of words but no rythm
i like it, you're good!
Not really meant to be rhythmic, I just try to do it straight off the bat. Can't bitch too much about feedback though!
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